Yep another one. It may be the last one for tonight, we will see.
The twins are introduced better in this chapter, and they are the pic above. All characters will be added as we figure it out.
You guys are doing pretty well reviewing, but some have permission to be in it, but aren’t leaving anything. Even a review that said, I didn’t find a mistake, or there is nothing I see to add, would be better than nothing. You guys are seeing how hard I work on this. Four hours to type these up, this chapter had me in tears. I live in this world when I type it up. See it all in my head as a memory I am in. So, leaving a review, is letting me know you appreciate it. Especially for these chapters, they are raw and I’m allowing you into the depths of my head. No other author has thought these characters up and I am borrowing their characters for my own story. Nope it is all mine. And that makes it sooo much more personal.
So take a few seconds, just to let me know you appreciate it, or even if you hate it. All input will be valuable when I got back and edit these later.
Enjoy the chapter.