When I Pretend

 

When I Pretend_edited-1

When I Pretend: Blood is spilled, and instead of James losing his life, a mate is found and the world is in a world of hurt.  The God of War is about to give lessons on why leaving him and his alone is a good idea.

Rated M for a reason folks.

Many thanks to thewriteashley for taking up the reigns on Betaing this.  Again, this is your reviews making this a reality.

Disclaimer for the story contained under this heading: Stephenie Myers own Twilight.  Not me.

Extras:
Character List
Song List

Chapters:
Chapter One – Condescending Talk
Chapter Two – Sift Through the Lies
Chapter Three — Set You Free
Chapter Four – Gonna Be Ok
Chapter Five – Age Has Never Made Me Wise

23 Comments

  1. theladykt

    OOOOH I’m gonna love this one.

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  2. thewriteashley

    Love me some Jasper – but you already know that 😉 Can’t wait fr what you come up with next…

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  3. kiraheart94

    I’m sooo glad you updated!!!! I just love me some Jasper!!

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  4. Dukkie

    I love it

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  5. Jessica

    Fabulous! !!

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  6. Linds

    Looking forward to more. Loving this story.

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  7. Michelle Fraga

    i was wondering when you wood update when i pretend?

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  8. Mavericka

    loved your story so far 🙂 and loved Jasper even more! lol!! can’t wait for more of both

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  9. Shena03

    This is a fantastic story. Can’t wait for more 🙂

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  10. tibbs8482

    I really like this story and hope that you update soon. I just recently read a new beginning and would love to be able to read the rest.

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  11. Krystan

    I hope you update soon, I LOVE this story!

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  12. alanna

    Love this story, hope you continue it soon!

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  13. flavelletania

    I like your story but would like to know how to get the updates for them to follow them and when is the next chapter going to be out ?

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    • Kittyinaz

      Up near the top of the side bar is a place you can put your email to get notifications of me updating. I am trying to get caught up, and I know this is a favorite, but I can’t promise a when.

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  14. twilight-et-the-vampire

    Hâte de lire la suite

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  15. Jenniy

    Love it so much

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  16. Rachel

    Are you still working on this story? It’s brilliant and I would love to read more.

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    • Kittyinaz

      It is not finished, it will be worked on once What If is finished. but it is far from abandoned.

      Reply
  17. Abbey

    I have loved this story for years, I hope you continue it. It’s just so good.

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  18. Susanne Jakobsson

    Really hope there is a update on this story soon.
    I love this story and would love to see it to the end

    Reply
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    Wonderful site. Lots of helpful information here.
    I’m sending it to a few pals ans also sharing in delicious.
    And certainly, thanks on your sweat!

    Reply

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